file Card Idea: Ashes of the eldest. and others

16 Sep 2011 14:09 - 16 Sep 2011 14:22 #10357 by victor_r
Card Name: Ashes of the Eldest
type: Equipment
Cost: 2 pool, Unique

Ashes of the eldest can give 2 any discliplines at low level and give +1 cap when it's equiped
can be stoled by D: for any Vampire

mastery, swordmaster
Type: Master
Cost: 1 Pool
swordmaster give +1 damage on melee weapon

mastery, gunner
Type: Master
Cost: 1 Pool
swordmaster give +1 damage on weapon gun
Last edit: 16 Sep 2011 14:22 by victor_r.

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16 Sep 2011 15:16 - 16 Sep 2011 15:32 #10359 by Pendargon
cool ideas, but bad text.

Let's try something like this :

Ashes of the Eldest
type: Unique Equipment
Cost: 2 pool

When a Vampire successfully equips with Ashes of the Eldest, choose two disciplines that this vampire does not have. This Vampire gains inferior level of those disciplines. He is one generation older. Any Vampire controlled by another Methuselah can steal this equipment as a D action.

Swordmaster
Type : master
Cost : 1 pool

Put this card on a ready Vampire. A Vampire with this card inflicts an additional damage when striking with a melle weapon. A Vampire can have only one Swordmaster.

Gunner

Type : master
Cost : 1 pool

Put this card on a ready Vampire. A Vampire with this card inflicts an additional damage when striking with a Gun. A Vampire can have only one Gunner.

Better? B)

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Last edit: 16 Sep 2011 15:32 by Pendargon.

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16 Sep 2011 15:17 #10360 by victor_r
thank you, i have an horrible english :(

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16 Sep 2011 21:13 #10372 by Juggernaut1981
Seemed like they still needed a bit of tweaking.


Master At Arms
Master
Master: Archetype
Choose a vampire you control; burn all other Archetypes on the chosen vampire. Put this card on the chosen vampire. This minion deals an additional damage on all attacks with melee weapons. A vampire may not have more than one Archetype.

Marksman
Master
Master: Archetype
Choose a vampire you control; burn all other Archetypes on the chosen vampire. Put this card on the chosen vampire. The minon deals an additional damage on all attacks with ranged weapons. A vampire may not have more than one Archetype.

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17 Sep 2011 06:39 - 17 Sep 2011 06:45 #10383 by Lech
It don't need to be archetype, and it make no thematic sense for those to be archetypes. Archetypes are all about regaining willpower represented as blood or doing stuff with willpower (say untap for 1 blood) for doing things in line with the vampire character. Not with boosting combat prowess.

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17 Sep 2011 10:23 - 17 Sep 2011 10:26 #10394 by Joscha

Pendargon wrote: cool ideas, but bad text.

Swordmaster
Type : master
Cost : 1 pool

Gunner
Type : master
Cost : 1 pool

...snip idea texts...

I like the cards. Although I find the effects too weak to let them cost a pool, even if you make gun-decks stronger. The Mastersection of combatdecks are often enough full enough of Fame, Tension and other important mastercards. So focusing on "Gunner" would be a hard choice for a pure Gundeck.

The Ashes seems fine. If you steal them you equip them, right? So you get to choose the discis. Could be fun with Erciyes Fragments :).

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