Black Hand-ish

Hey there, I want some feedback on this mindfuck, that may work one day xDD still getting some of the cards but I want Black Hand fun with the new arabic-like Trujah

Deck Name: Black Handish
Author: Ishvalan

Crypt (12 cards; Capacity min=3 max=8 avg=5.83)
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4x Al-Muntathir, God's Witness 8 obf qui AUS FOR PRE TEM True Brujah:5
1x Aredhel 5 aus FOR VAL !Salubri:4
2x Dr. Morrow, The Skindoctor 5 for AUS VIC Tzimisce:5
1x Kestrelle Hayes 6 dom for obt AUS !Ventrue:5
1x Lubomira Hradok 3 OBF !Nosferatu:5
2x Nicomedes 5 aus for nec vic Harbinger of Skulls:4
1x Rashid Stockton 4 cel obf vic !Gangrel:5

Library (90 cards)
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Master (12)
1x Anarch Troublemaker
1x Auspex
2x Dreams of the Sphinx
2x Shakar
4x Vessel
1x WMRH Talk Radio
1x Wider View

Action (14)
2x Abbot
2x Clotho's Gift
2x Dream World
8x Reunion Kamut

Equipment (3)
1x Bowl of Convergence
1x Guarded Rubrics
1x Ivory Bow

Ally (1)
1x Mylan Horseed (Goblin)

Action Modifier (16)
2x Cloak the Gathering
6x Domain of Evernight
2x Freak Drive
2x Lost in Crowds
4x Pocket Out of Time

Reaction (19)
5x Eyes of Argus
2x Forced Awakening
3x Ministry
3x On the Qui Vive
4x Telepathic Misdirection
2x Truth in Ink

Combat (21)
1x Baal's Bloody Talons
2x Hidden Strength
3x Rolling with the Punches
3x Soak
3x Target Vitals
5x Taste of Vitae
4x Weighted Walking Stick

Combo (4)
4x Quicksilver Contemplation

1. How do you intend to oust?
Bleeding when I get enough minions or the chance of making damage to my prey's pool.

2. How do you intend to keep from being ousted?
Bloating via the BH tech, visiting any bleeder in my back, bouncing if I have it in hand, in one word: toolboxing my ass.

3. What do you want your ready region to look like (ie, how many guys are you planning on getting out)?
Al-Muntathir and the most BH dudes I manage to get. Nicomedes always there to make my hand the better the best.

4. What do you want your average turn to look like?
Bloat here, maybe some bleed, equipping, reacting to the table, looking for chances.

5. What's your metagame like? How do your opponents play?
My meta is varied, but I always see at least 1 combat deck and also blockers are frequent.

6. What problems have you observed with the deck in play?
Haven't tested yet... I'm tempted to make some proxys...

no advices? is this THE DECK, nearly perfect?

ps: pls dont ask me to put Summon History xDD

Frankly the problem with this deck is you don't know where to begin.

There doesn't seem to be a clear idea behind how to win a game. Your statement "Bloat here, maybe some bleed, equipping, reacting to the table, looking for chances" is exactly the problem. You can do everything a bit, but you don't threat your opponents. Your combat is nothing to be afraid of. Your bleeding offense is nothing to be afraid of. Your defense is solid enough to survive long enough to get some point. But where is THE PLAN?

You seem undecided if you want to make a deck with your favourite Al-Muntathir or with Black Hand. I doubt that both is satisfying.
If I would do BH, then all good BH-cards like Watchtower, Seraph's Second, Sennadurek, maybe some Psychic Assault plus Target Vitals had to be in. Art of Memory maybe too? Guarded Rubrics is in already, thumbs up. I'd go the Aus/Dom-route plua bloat via Reunion Kamut. You can go more fighty with Teresita and friends, adding ani/pot-combat plus ministry for blocking torporrescues. Funny too. But your deck is hanging in between three different mechanics and in my opinion loses strength because of this. One focus plus some good additional (toolboxy) cards makes often a stronger deck.

But then again maybe I just don't like toolboxing.

If I would build a Al-Muntathir based deck (without Summon History) I'd go multiact with Freak Drives and Domain of Evernights (like you began with), added some more Temporis-goodies (plus Tabriz Assembly) and would bleed like hell with Vaticination or fight like hell with pot plus Tem or maybe some Assault Rifle fetched with Clio's Kiss. Forget about BH completely.

I agree with Joscha. The deck craves for some kind of a focus. Reunion Kamut is a good bloat which ensures you can either pool it or get extra free transfers. Art of Memory and even Drop Point Network could prove to be useful. Equipment section seems solid.

Please let us know how it turned out to be if you ever get to play with it!

Did the other reply got erased? omg...

First of all thanks for the answers =) the PLAN was bringing out as many BH as possible and then bleed with them with Dream World or equipment.

Honestly I don't want to make a multirush deck, I thought about a AK-47 multirush with Pocket Out of Time to get enough combats to torporize the other minion, but I prefer multirushing with Fatima or Janni with weapons

Do you think we can bring something useful here?

How odd.

I played this at our last qualifier, two weeks ago. It also felt very diffuse, like it could have been good at one thing, if only it wasn't doing several.