Dust to Dust inspired cards

Here are some cards that is inspired by the new book:

Powerbase: Gary
Master
Unique location
During any meths untaphase. If he controls more than 4 vampires. He moves 1 pool to this card. If controlling met controls 1, 2 or 3 vampires. He may move all counters to his pool as a master phase action. Any vampire, controlled by meth who controls 3 or less vampires, may steal this location as a action.
**********okay, okay WORDING should be different************

Jean Lisle
Samedi
Cap 8

Independent.
When Jean is moved to the ready region. But a urn counter on him. If Jean has a urn counter, he may not act or block. Any vampire may burn a urn counter as an action. +1 Strength

Maria DiMatto
Giovanni
Cap 4

May not have or use weapons. Maria gets +1 stealth on employ and recruit actions.

Sullivan Dane
Action - Ally
Cost 2 Pool
Unique Mortal
1 Stength 2 life 2 bleed
When Sullivan enters the ready region. Search you library, ashheap or hand for a True Faith (pay cost as normal) card and put it on him.
Dane may strike to burn a Zombie, Wraith or Demon as a first strike hand strike.

Lazlo Varga
Action - Ally
Cost 2 Pool
Unique Zombie
0 Strength 1 Life 1 bleed
You may tap Lazlo during your turn to recruit a Shambling Horde as superior (no cost is payed). If Lazlo is burned, burn all Shambling Hordes.
Lazlo is immune to all non-aggro strikes.

Modius
Toreador
Cap 7

Prince of Gary. Modius gets 1 fewer votes if there are any other ready princes.

The spelling errors make the card very hard to read, especially for foreigner like me. I hope I haven't misunderstood

The powerbase seem very scarsely useable, and will punish esentially blood brother and side strategy that don't really work anyway. Maling it work on any minion and not just vampire may make it a lot more useable, while still not too useful. Still, isn't there enough weenie hoser already ?

Jean Lisle is very weak for a 8-cap with a pentex subversion on him. But the disavantadge feel very flavorful.

Nothing special on Maria

Sullivan Dane seem a must have in about every deck. 2 pool for a 2-bleed ally that can't be stolen by Dominate or Presence ? Yes please. But it also mean he will weaken Shambling mound a lot.

Lazlo is also a beast, especially with Mary Streck and / or the Unmasking. He either block with impunity or bleed for one once everything is clear. The fact that he allow to actionlessly recruit superior shambling being a powerful bonus.

Modius is pretty bland but may allow some side strategy with its odds discipline repartition.

Ahh. Forget the powerbase. I couldn't get my head around it. I wanted to create a powerbase like the old once (chicago/Dc). But since Gary is a small place. I thought it should benefit players with few vampires.

Jean, yeah, maybe reduce his cap, or add and/or He is a 6th gen vampire in the book. So a high cap should be thematically right. But hey! this is VtES!

Sullivan will actually cost 3. (Hence cost of True Faith).

Thanks for your input!