Card Idea: Shrouds of the Polis

This card look weak/expensive to me.
Either the cost should be lowered to 0 blood, or the card should be powered up.
E.g. add maneuver to [obf][pro].
And, idn mb, make [obf] +2 stealth (for 1 blood cost)? (got the point of message below)

jAvel wrote:

And, idn mb, make [obf] +2 stealth (for 1 blood cost)?

It would mean that this card allow any [obf] minion to gain 2 stealth on bleed action.

And if the text would be
"[obf] +1 stealth, and once this action this vampire can burn 1 blood to get additional +1 stealth.
[obf][pro] ...(optional maneuver + aggro hands)"

Name: Shrouds of the Polis
Cardtype: /

This vampire may burn one blood to make the damage from his hand strikes aggravated until the end of the current round.

+1 Stealth.

As , with an optional Strike: Dodge.

How about like so? Pro at single level for the claws makes it easier for everyone in the ready region to effectively use the card, the stealth is still there as is the dodge except that both are now free.


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Agg/+1 Stealth is solid but the superior is bad. A double discipline card should not require extra cards to work, especially not cards coming from a third discipline. How about an optional maneuver instead?

The thing is, I don't want to forcibly replace Claws of the Dead.

Plus, I don't believe that the extra-superior level of a card like this needs to do grand things... it just needs to add versatility, really.

Saying that the extra-superior "requires a third discipline to work" isn't correct at all... it provides a valid effect and gives the minion the option to enhance that effect with the third discipline available to the city !Gangrel.


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