file Democritus (ADV)

01 Oct 2018 01:57 #90856 by XZealot
Democritus (ADV) was created by XZealot
Name: Democritus ADV

Cardtype: Vampire
Clan: Ventrue
Group: 1
Capacity: 10
Discipline: AUS CEL FOR DOM PRE
Camarilla Ventrue Justicar:
[MERGED] Democritus may search your library for a unique card and put that card in play as a +1 stealth action. Democritus may only do this if that card would contest a card that is already in play.

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01 Oct 2018 03:38 #90857 by ReverendRevolver
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Kinda cool (almost all of group 1 and several parts of AH&DS just need better discipline levels).

I feel like flavor wise with the base you're on to something. Maybe:

As a +1 stealth action that costs 1 pool Democritus may move a card from you ash heap into play facedown, and Choose a unique Library card in play conttolled bh another Methuselah. The first card becomes a copy of the second card. Burn the first card if the second card is yielded.
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01 Oct 2018 05:19 #90861 by Boris The Blade
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I like the OP's version better. The second one is just an uncomfortably wordy way to say: burn a unique library card in play. One of the disciplines should go back to inferior: other justicars have only 4 superior disciplines.
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01 Oct 2018 11:29 - 01 Oct 2018 11:32 #90872 by Ankha
Replied by Ankha on topic Democritus (ADV)

XZealot wrote: Name: Democritus ADV

Cardtype: Vampire
Clan: Ventrue
Group: 1
Capacity: 10
Discipline: AUS CEL FOR DOM PRE
Camarilla Ventrue Justicar:
[MERGED] Democritus may search your library for a unique card and put that card in play as a +1 stealth action. Democritus may only do this if that card would contest a card that is already in play.


Rather: Democritys can search your library for a copy of a unique card in play, reveal it, and move it to your hand as a +1 stealth action (shuffle and discard down afterward).

I would skip the "and put that card into play" part. Keep it simple.

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Last edit: 01 Oct 2018 11:32 by Ankha.

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01 Oct 2018 12:27 #90876 by ReverendRevolver
Replied by ReverendRevolver on topic Democritus (ADV)

Boris The Blade wrote: I like the OP's version better. The second one is just an uncomfortably wordy way to say: burn a unique library card in play. One of the disciplines should go back to inferior: other justicars have only 4 superior disciplines.


Maybe :CEL: :DOM: :FOR: :PRE: :aus: ?
Superior :CEL: sets him apart from all other justicars, as only the torries and brujah Justicars have it. :aus: is whatever, as he has :DOM: for bounce and second trad to block, but can still use it for small intercept if needed.
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01 Oct 2018 16:38 #90883 by Kraus
Replied by Kraus on topic Democritus (ADV)
Once this gets printed, just make doubly sure that the art has as massive and majestic a jaw as the original.

Democritus aches for an advanced form, for sure. Ankha's suggestion makes for the best suggestion yet. The effect isn't exactly powerful though, so you might want to give an extra unlock for the effect, or remove the effect from 'merged' status and just let the advanced version have it. You'll get an extra bleed when merged. Merge for an extra bleed or something?

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