How to get the best results from Deck Clinic posts

1) Post your deck using ARDB or Secret Library format. This allows players familiar with the game to quickly and easily see how much of your deck is played on your turn, how much is played on others turns, etc.
ardb.googlecode.com/files/Ardb_3_1_1.zip
www.secretlibrary.info/?deck

2) Answer as many of these questions in your description as you can:

1. How do you intend to oust?
2. How do you intend to keep from being ousted?
3. What do you want your ready region to look like (ie, how many guys are you planning on getting out)?
4. What do you want your average turn to look like?
5. What's your metagame like? How do your opponents play?
6. What problems have you observed with the deck in play?

3) Mentioning if you've reviewed a particular deck building article and would like help with implementing that advice is also a good choice.
www.thelasombra.com/deck-building-theories.htm

It might be worth considering another question:

7) Why did you decide to use your particular crypt and library size? Using more than 12 crypt cards is unusual. I also think most decks can be trimmed to 80-, if not 60-card libraries.