Dylan's Will

What about this deck?
It come from an idea had reading a post in this forum and from an hint by Pascal.
Waiting for your impression about it.

Deck Name: Dylan Infernal Bleed
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Crypt (Capacity min=6 max=8 avg=6.5; 12 cards)
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3x Dylan 6 aus cel dom for pro !Ventrue:2
5x Dylan ADV 6 aus cel dai dom pro FOR !Ventrue:2
2x Joseph O'Grady 7 aus cel DOM FOR !Ventrue:3
2x Owain Evans, The Wanderer 8 cel pre AUS DOM FOR !Ventrue:3

Library (85 cards)
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Master (12 cards)
1x Barrens, The
1x Corporate Hunting Ground
1x Dark Influences
2x Dominate
1x Elder Library
1x Giant's Blood
5x Vessel

Action (19 cards)
4x Concordance
1x Contagion
6x Force of Will
4x Govern the Unaligned
4x Recruiting Party

Equipment (3 cards)
1x Palatial Estate
2x Textbook Damnation, The

Ally (4 cards)
4x Infernal Servitor

Action Modifier (31 cards)
3x Command of the Beast
4x Conditioning
4x Daring the Dawn
3x Dawn Operation
5x Forced March
3x Foreshadowing Destruction
5x Freak Drive
4x Seduction

Reaction (12 cards)
8x Deflection
4x Eluding the Arms of Morpheus

Combat (4 cards)
4x Skin of Rock

Created with Secret Library v0.9.4c. (Aug 11, 2015 05:05:03)

The Vessels should just be Life in the City because you will just be pushing blood to your guys. Perfectionist is good too.

For the crypt it seems like dom FOR is more important than DOM. Palatial Estate isn't that great, npr is Elder Library. For card cycling I think that Dreams of the Sphinx, The Barrens, Heart of Nizchetus and Distraction are better than Elder Library. You don't want to be in combat, so Forced Vigilence is better than Eluding.

I like the plan, but that's a lot of Dylans in the crypt! I think you only need Dylan advanced, and then maybe one base if you want permanent +1 bleed. Also add 1-2 Wider view if you have that many duplicates in the crypt.

If you are going to use Kaymakli Fragment you can put a few more different dom-for guys in the crypt to transfer out for free.

Dylan adv is red list, so you want some protection for him, Secure Haven/Carlton/Unleash Hell's Fury come to mind. Maybe a bunch of Soak and a few surprise Flames of the Netherworld to survive/break gun walls?