Ishtarri bruise bleed

This is my first stab to Ishtarri, so suggestions welcome. Basic idea is to stack permanent bleed on your guys with Despirals, which is not restricted to one per minion, so get +2 or +3 bleed from each one, more than that would get too expensive, then bleed with light stealth if your prey doesn't have bounce, or with no stealth if he does, change of targets are there mainly against bounce, if your prey blocks just shoot his guys. I haven't tested this yet but my main concerns are the lack of defense and expensive guns. I was initially planning on adding a defense module with sport bikes, cheap intercept locations, and wakes with couple no secrets for Ubende, but in the end didn't manage to fit it in the deck.

Crypt:
1x Abu Nuwasi
1x Kenyatta
2x Elizabeth Conde
1x Shasa Abu Badr
1x Agru Kabera
2x Honorine Ateba
2x Ganhuru
2x Ubende

Library: 90

Master: 18
1x Ancestor Spirit
3x Celerity
1x Fortitude
2x Mbare Market, Harare
4x Perfectionist
1x Powerbase: Tshwane
4x Vessel
2x Wider View

Action: 21
8x Despiral
10x Enchant Kindred
3x Mind Numb

Action Modifier: 19
5x Change of Target
10x Forced March
4x Resist Earth's Grasp

Combat: 23
6x Concealed Weapon
7x Pursuit
4x Resilience
6x Rolling with the Punches

Equipment: 9
8x .44 Magnum
1x Heart of Nizchetus

With some more time and nothing to do with it, made a slightly different version that has considerably less pool costing cards and thus should be more effective in staying alive, without losing much from its overall effectiveness.

Crypt:
1x Abu Nuwasi
1x Kenyatta
2x Elizabeth Conde
1x Shasa Abu Badr
1x Agru Kabera
2x Honorine Ateba
2x Ganhuru
2x Ubende

Library: 90

Master: 18
1x Ancestor Spirit
5x Blood Doll
3x Celerity
1x Fortitude
2x Mbare Market, Harare
4x Perfectionist
2x Wider View

Action: 21
8x Despiral
10x Enchant Kindred
3x Mind Numb

Action Modifier: 19
5x Change of Target
10x Forced March
4x Resist Earth's Grasp

Combat: 31
2x Fast Hands
8x Pursuit
4x Resilience
6x Rolling with the Punches
3x Soak
8x Weighted Walking Stick

Equipment: 1
1x Heart of Nizchetus

What about combat module based upon:

8x Zip Gun
8x Target Vitals
8x Hidden Strength

It's more for FOR based vampires.

I am not a huge fan of 1+vitals, thats way too easily foiled by even casual prevent. Whereas wws + additional strike has lot more versatility, getting around dodges (Carlton I am looking at you), and being fairly hard to prevent, and you don't waste cards if they s:ce.

I was considering some Ishtarri Warlords, but I am just not sure if optional manuever or press each combat is worth 1 pool, that card really should have been free.