[Submission] Siren's Beckoning

Name: Siren's beckoning
Cardtype: Action
Cost: 1 blood
Capacity: Not applicable
Discipline: Melpominee
Clan: None
+1 stealth. Only playable on a tapped.
[for] Burn 1 blood from a younger vampire controlled by prey or predator.
[mel] Put this card on a vampire controlled by your prey. The vampire with this card does not untap as normal. During his or her controller's untap phase, he or she may burn 1 blood to untap. This vampire may burn this card as an +1 steañth action.
[Mel] As above, but burning this card costs 1 pool.

Flavor text: "Come this way (...) and stay your ship, so that you can listen here to our singing" , The Odysey 12.184- 12.196)
Art notes: A vampire too shocked to move, staring into a wall.

World of Darkness reference: Vampire Storytellers Companion - Page 35

How does this card address a compelling game need?: Art's traumatic essence tends to stay on a vampire just one untap phase. You put it and next untap it is gone, this may add some play to it.

Created by: Ignacio Mir

Nice

For the power, I was initially expecting it to be "Could not block this minion", "Cannot untap", or "-2 intercept" due to being transfixed by the acting minion. An alternative suggestion could be to make it take two or three actions to remove if you want to combo with Art's Traumatic Essence ). With presence in-clan, I'm not sure if burning extra pool is as much or a priority, but I admit I don't have much experience of playing Daughters.

Nac wrote:

+1 stealth. Only playable on a tapped.
[for] Burn 1 blood from a younger vampire controlled by prey or predator.
[mel] Put this card on a vampire controlled by your prey. The vampire with this card does not untap as normal. During his or her controller's untap phase, he or she may burn 1 blood to untap. This vampire may burn this card as an +1 steañth action.
[Mel] As above, but burning this card costs 1 pool.

I'd consider making the Fortitude level apply to allies in some fashion, so that the card isn't totally worthless when faced with Imbued or super heavy ally decks.

jamesatzephyr wrote:

Nac wrote:

+1 stealth. Only playable on a tapped.
[for] Burn 1 blood from a younger vampire controlled by prey or predator.
[mel] Put this card on a vampire controlled by your prey. The vampire with this card does not untap as normal. During his or her controller's untap phase, he or she may burn 1 blood to untap. This vampire may burn this card as an +1 steañth action.
[Mel] As above, but burning this card costs 1 pool.

I'd consider making the Fortitude level apply to allies in some fashion, so that the card isn't totally worthless when faced with Imbued or super heavy ally decks.

I thought of it only in vampire for balance purposes but reading art's traumatic essence, it could go with minion on all effects as well.