Submission: Virstania, the Great Mother
15 Apr 2016 07:53 - 17 Apr 2016 08:28 #76438
by GreyB
-1 Strength
Submission: Virstania, the Great Mother was created by GreyB
I had an earlier version where the Gargoyle Virstania was an advancement, however discipline wise it gave me some headaches. My proposed solution is to bump the Gargoyle Virstania up 2 groups, works for a vampire that totally changes 
Name: Virstania, the Great Mother
Group: 5
Capacity: 7
Clan:
Disciplines:

Card Text:
Independent.
While Virstania is ready, your independent Gargoyles have +1 strength and can bleed at +1 bleed as a
action that costs 1 blood. Flight.
Flavor text:
"She loved them so much, she turned into one of them, lost forever.". - Goratrix
World of Darkness reference:
Though Virstania never turned into a Gargoyle in WoD, it seems to me to be a logical next step considering her odd Gargoyle fetish.
How does this card address a compelling game need?:
Empower independent Gargoyles.
Created by: Ben Gerrissen
I'm not sure about the +1 strength effect, don't think it's too powerful, but leave that up to the judges. An alternative would be to copy paste the original text or the following:
While Virstania is ready, your gargoyles are independent and their slave status innate.
Meaning, if your gargoyle gets stolen or Virstania enters torpor and it was a slave, it turns into a slave again.

Name: Virstania, the Great Mother
Group: 5
Capacity: 7
Clan:

Disciplines:




Card Text:
Independent.
While Virstania is ready, your independent Gargoyles have +1 strength and can bleed at +1 bleed as a

Flavor text:
"She loved them so much, she turned into one of them, lost forever.". - Goratrix
World of Darkness reference:
Though Virstania never turned into a Gargoyle in WoD, it seems to me to be a logical next step considering her odd Gargoyle fetish.
How does this card address a compelling game need?:
Empower independent Gargoyles.
Created by: Ben Gerrissen
I'm not sure about the +1 strength effect, don't think it's too powerful, but leave that up to the judges. An alternative would be to copy paste the original text or the following:
While Virstania is ready, your gargoyles are independent and their slave status innate.
Meaning, if your gargoyle gets stolen or Virstania enters torpor and it was a slave, it turns into a slave again.





Last edit: 17 Apr 2016 08:28 by GreyB.
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20 Apr 2016 15:19 #76548
by ReverendRevolver
Replied by ReverendRevolver on topic Submission: Virstania, the Great Mother
You make this anything but her, it works. Adv vamps group with originals. Agree this text, capacity, spread, etc is,GREAT though.
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