Submission: Storied Combatant and Painful consequence

Storied Combatant
Master
1 pool
Put this card on a vampire with capacity 8 or more. Whenever a vampire is sent to torpor with zero blood, or an imbued is sent to the incapacitated region, you may put a Story counter on this card. This vampire gets +1 bleed for eaxh story counter on this card. This vampire can burn a story counter to give a blocking younger vampire -1 intercept once an action. If this vampire goes to torpor, burn all stoey counters on this card and one pool.

Need: combat needs help

Art: Karsh mercilessly beating do cerro

Painful Consequence
Action modifier/combat
Requires a vampire with capacity 6or more.
If this minion sent an opposing vampire or imbued to his or her preys torpor or uncontrolled region with no blood or life this action, pit this card on this vampire. If yoir prey has any minions in torpor or the incapacitated region, this vampire gets +1 bleed. A vampire can have only one Painful Consequences.
Art: imposingly posed Xavier

Need: combat needs help.
Note compatability with imbued and empty requirements to not reward agg poke.

Designed by corey porter

ReverendRevolver wrote:

Storied Combatant
Master
1 pool
Put this card on a vampire with capacity 8 or more. Whenever a vampire is sent to torpor with zero blood, or an imbued is sent to the incapacitated region, you may put a Story counter on this card. This vampire gets +1 bleed for eaxh story counter on this card. This vampire can burn a story counter to give a blocking younger vampire -1 intercept once an action. If this vampire goes to torpor, burn all stoey counters on this card and one pool.

Need: combat needs help

Problem: doesn't restrict itself to combat, nor other people's minions.

I could definitely see someone attempting some sort of filth with Ankla Hotep. Get him into torpor (easy, he has superior Fortitude), rescue him for free, repeat. Would it be effective? Maybe not so much. Really dull for everyone else as he tries to build up a +8 bleed bleedzooka? More likely. I mean, it's not Una, but...

If you changed it to something like "When a minion controlled by another Methuselah goes to torpor or the incapacity region with zero blood or life...", maybe that would be less aggravating.

ReverendRevolver wrote:

Painful Consequence
Action modifier/combat
Requires a vampire with capacity 6or more.
If this minion sent an opposing vampire or imbued to his or her preys torpor or uncontrolled region with no blood or life this action, pit this card on this vampire. If yoir prey has any minions in torpor or the incapacitated region, this vampire gets +1 bleed. A vampire can have only one Painful Consequences.

Has potential, though would be hard to stack in large quantities in a deck since it requires fatties and the last thing you want to do is draw them into your hand. Still, 3-4 in a moderately fatty combat deck could liven it up.

Probably also needs a "and this vampire did not go to torpor" clause, as it would be weird to get +Bleed out of a combat where you both went to torpor.

Goofed on the first. Its supposed to get counters when the vamp it was in sends someone to torpor in fombat or as an action.

Second card, i wanted balance, and thats why i placed cap restriction. Weenie animalism and potence dont need as much help.

Warrior of Legend
Unique Master. Archetype.
Put this on a vampire capacity 8 or more. During combat, if the opposing minion is no longer ready, put a Legend counter on this card. If this vampire takes a action which makes another Methuselah's ready minion leave the ready region, put a Legend counter on this card. +X bleed where X is the Legend Counters on this card. Burn all the Legend counters if this minion goes to torpor.

Also be careful of these stacking with themselves - I'm totally going to 10 copies of Storied Combatant on one vamp. He torps a victim and suddenly has +10 bleed.

Vampire can have only one archetype is a common solution for that.