file [Submission] Dead Reckoning

02 Feb 2015 16:48 - 02 Feb 2015 21:41 #69023 by chrisn101
OK, how about this?

You cannot play another action modifier to increase this bleed amount.
:thn: :nec: +1 bleed. If this action is blocked, this acting vampire gets an optional maneuver in the resulting combat.
:THN: :nec: As above, but if successful you may burn a blood to add a burn counter to a location controlled by your prey: when there are three, burn the counters and location.
:THN: :NEC: As above, but for +2 bleed.

(Or the second and third could be flipped?)
Last edit: 02 Feb 2015 21:41 by chrisn101. Reason: (Added "if successful" to second action).

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14 Feb 2015 10:26 #69228 by alek
it's all over the place. It feels like few different cards mixed together.
I would remove middle option - it doesn't fit with the rest of the card and is too complicated with all the extra counters, etc. My proposition:
[tha][nec]+1 bleed. If this action is blocked, this acting vampire gets an optional maneuver in the resulting combat.
[THA][NEC]As above, but for +2 bleed.

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