[Submission]: The Unseen Storm
31 May 2025 17:01 - 05 Jun 2025 23:47 #114560
by Pedro
Name: The Unseen Storm
Cardtype: Modifier
Cost: 1 Blood
Discipline: Celerity
Inferior celerity [cel] Minions without auspex [aus] have -1 intercept.
Superior celerity [CEL] As above, and put this card on this vampire. This vampire can burn this card to unlock after performing a successful action during which no reaction cards are played.
Flavor text: None
Art notes: A vampire moving fast as lighting with a group of vampires failing to catch it.
World of Darkness reference: None, it is a celerity skill being used.
How does this card address a compelling game need?: This card is to give celerity another option for stealth without being overbearing. The disciple only has stealth that costs blood and in this case instead of stealth it is only giving minions without auspex -1 intercept. It is fitting to the lore since auspex is the ability to detect things and in this case the vampire is so fast he is not detected.
The reason it is situational card at basic is due to the better superior effect. It is a card that stays in play and allows the vampire to unlock by burning the card only if there was no reactions played. This is similar to perfectionist but instead of gaining blood it allows the unlock. It is also a new unlock card for celerity which they have only a few.
I do not know if it is too strong as is and if it would be better if the superior effect did not have "as above". Doing both things at superior may be overbearing and giving instead the option of superior or inferior effect may be more interesting as a card for celerity. Do you want the -1 intercept or the unlock after an action? Playtesting could help see what would be the best case especially with decks like stanislava (but she does have better options).
Created by: Pedro Valentim
With card art using AI software.
[Submission]: The Unseen Storm was created by Pedro
Name: The Unseen Storm
Cardtype: Modifier
Cost: 1 Blood
Discipline: Celerity
Inferior celerity [cel] Minions without auspex [aus] have -1 intercept.
Superior celerity [CEL] As above, and put this card on this vampire. This vampire can burn this card to unlock after performing a successful action during which no reaction cards are played.
Flavor text: None
Art notes: A vampire moving fast as lighting with a group of vampires failing to catch it.
World of Darkness reference: None, it is a celerity skill being used.
How does this card address a compelling game need?: This card is to give celerity another option for stealth without being overbearing. The disciple only has stealth that costs blood and in this case instead of stealth it is only giving minions without auspex -1 intercept. It is fitting to the lore since auspex is the ability to detect things and in this case the vampire is so fast he is not detected.
The reason it is situational card at basic is due to the better superior effect. It is a card that stays in play and allows the vampire to unlock by burning the card only if there was no reactions played. This is similar to perfectionist but instead of gaining blood it allows the unlock. It is also a new unlock card for celerity which they have only a few.
I do not know if it is too strong as is and if it would be better if the superior effect did not have "as above". Doing both things at superior may be overbearing and giving instead the option of superior or inferior effect may be more interesting as a card for celerity. Do you want the -1 intercept or the unlock after an action? Playtesting could help see what would be the best case especially with decks like stanislava (but she does have better options).
Created by: Pedro Valentim
With card art using AI software.
Last edit: 05 Jun 2025 23:47 by Pedro.
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