New Player Guide / Cheatsheet

Sheet 1:

• I'd write "You" rather than "What you do", to keep it in line with "other players" and to make it more simple.
• "Cardless actions: Bleed (1 by default), " is a bit unclear whereas you can bleed only once with all your minions, or each of your minion. I'd write "(max: once per minion)"
• Cardless actions is missing "leave torpor"
• "4. Infulence phase": typo, should be "Influence"

Block 4. Influence phase. I'd rather write:

You have 4 transfers to use.
1 tranfer: move 1 pool to one of your uncontrolled minion
2 transfers: move 1 pool back from one of your uncontrolled minion
4 transfers and 1 pool: draw a new crypt card

• "Cancel Event cards with certain cards". I'd write "with cards such as Not to Be" (just like you did with Sudden Reversal
• Combat Sequence "When a minion is blocked or attacked combat occurs". The term "attacked" doesn't exist after Jyhad edition. Use "A minion enters combat when he or she is blocked, or through cards such as Bum's Rush"
• "Each of the below steps" => "of the steps below"
• "Range by default is close (it's either long or close)" => "(it can switch between long and close)"
• "(unless steal life / first strike)" => "(steal blood and first strike happen first)"
• "A damage empty vampire goes to torpor" => "A damaged..."
• "(only 1 set of additional strikes allowed)" => "(only 1 source...)"
• Minions (vampires and allies): usage of "they" when it should be "he or she"
• "Only ready untapped minions can perform actions" => add "(except to leave torpor)"
• "(multiple hunts and rescues allowed)" => I would add an asterisk to those actions (and diablerie) in the "3. Minion phase" block and write "(except cardless actions marked with *. See 3.)"

"The first player only has 1 transfer. This increases by 1 each turn until the 4th player has 4 transfers" => ambiguous. One could think the first player has 2 transfers on the 2nd turn etc. I'd rather write:

"On the first turn, the first player has 1 transfer, the second player 2 transfers, the third player 3 transfers. After that, all players have 4 transfers each turn."

"Once the cost has been met the crypt card is flipped..." => this is wrong, crypt cards are flipped at the end of the influence phase. => "At the end of the influence phase, each crypt card with enough blood to reach its capacity is moved to the ready region, face up (extra blood wears off)."

• "Your prey is to your left – oust them by reducing their pool to 0 (gain a Victory Point / VP)" => "...to 0 in order to gain 1 Victory Point and 6 pool." Also replace "them" by "him or her"
• "Your predator is to your right – prevent them from ousting you." => replace "them" by "him or her"
• "A directed action targets another player or a card controlled by them." => "or a card he or she controls"
• "Only the controller targeted by the directed action can block it." => "Only the player..."
• "or 2 hours have passed"

The second link directs to the same file as the first link.