Something to hand out at a Demo Event

Hello all - I'm going to be running a demo event at a local gaming convention in February and I wanted to have something to hand out to people to let them know about the local VTES playgroups and provide them with the URLs to some sites that will help them figure out how to get started with the game. I'd like to just give them the VEKN site's address, but with the website the way it is, I feel like I should also provide them with my blog's address (for the beginner's section). Anyway, I've made two business card designs that I'm considering and I'd love to get some feedback and suggestions on them!


(By the way, I'm not sure who did this VEKN tri-snake design, but it's the only tri-snake design that I could find that is high res - if somebody knows of another one, I'd love to just use one without the VEKN letters. Also - if you created this picture, please feel free to tell me not to use it!)



So which do you like best? Got any suggestions for changing either design?

This is what we use:





Can provide the PSD if you like...

Wow, Ke, those look awesome! I might well try to steal that cardback from you! Here's a look at my current two designs. A player reminded me about tinyurl, and so now I can actually include links to our current playgroup discussion forums. The only real question for me is whether the white on marble card is actually legible. It looks good on the computer screen, but who knows what it will actually look like. I might play it safe and just get the second one. Anybody have any opinions?

Maybe try using only two different fonts per card. The cards' look is neat, but somehow distracting.

I agree that it's busy - I'm trying to fit so much information on there! Maybe too much.... But I was trying to go with 3 fonts - one for the title (I picked the one that most reminded me of VtM), one for all the normal text, and a third for the URLs. But it turns out that the version I had originally posted above had 4 fonts! I've fixed that and re-uploaded some images. Hopefully they look a bit better now. Still busy, but hopefully a little less distracting. You'll have to tell me if it needs one fewer font (Change the URL or title font to the normal text font?). Thanks!

Better now, I would say. You could try out giving the headline the fonts of the URL, especially in the black and white version with the tri-snake logo on it (for a clearer text-picture structure).