Bleed them at dawn

This is a deck under construction. Have never played anything like it so I would appreciate some criticism and thoughts on if it would be playable at all.
The idea is go forward and bleed big, if blocked make it a dawn operation and agg down whatever is in the way. It does not have much defense, unfortunately the dawn operations are useless with rushes.


Deck Name: Daughters of the Dawn

Created By: Oskar



Crypt: (10 cards, Min: 20, Max: 29, Avg: 6.1)

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1 Antoinette Dubois for mel PRE 4 Daughters of Cacophony

1 Boss Callihan dom for pro PRE5 Ventrue

1 Evil Jensen FOR PRE mel nec pot6 Daughters of Cacophony

1 Gotsdam ani AUS DOM FOR PRE9 Ventrue

1 Gracis Nostinus aus DOM for PRE7 Ventrue

1 Honorine Ateba cel nec FOR PRE6 Ishtarri

1 Mustafa cel dom FOR PRE6 Ventrue

1 Sayshila dem FOR MEL PRE7 Daughters of Cacophony

1 Shasa Abu Badr cel for PRE 5 Ishtarri

1 Yseult FOR MEL PRE 6 Daughters of Cacophony



Library: (70 cards)

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Master (3 cards)

1 Anarch Troublemaker

1 Pentex Subversion

1 Ventrue Headquarters



Action (16 cards)

2 Art`s Traumatic Essence

1 Enchant Kindred

2 Entrancement

1 Graverobbing

10 Legal Manipulations



Action Modifier (24 cards)

1 Approximation of Loyalty

1 Bewitching Oration

2 Change of Target

10 Dawn Operation

5 Freak Drive

2 Phantom Speaker

2 Virtuosa

1 Voter Captivation



Political Action (4 cards)

4 Lily Prelude



Reaction (3 cards)

1 Tourette`s Voice

2 On the Qui Vive



Combat (16 cards)

2 Death of the Drum

5 Indomitability

1 Majesty

2 Skin of Night

2 Skin of Rock

1 Skin of Steel

3 Weighted Walking Stick



Ally (1 cards)

1 Carlton Van Wyk (Hunter)



Equipment (1 cards)

1 .44 Magnum



Event (1 cards)

1 Narrow Minds



Combo (1 cards)

1 Madrigal

Two things:
1) It would be a bit easier to read the deck if there weren't so many blank lines.
2) Is this a vote deck or a bleed deck? It CAN be both, but with the Dawn Operation stuff, your card pool is further limited.

My first thought is that you should

1) add 8-10 masters
2) decide on 1 or 2 vampires you really want to have in your ready region (one of which should have dominate) and triple up one those in favor of vampires you won't likely put into play
3) add deflections

I do not have much experience with decks like this, but I fear that once your prey recognises your technique she/he will simply stop blocking - or try to fight at long range.
Therefore I would consider less Daring the Dawn and maybe more Death of the Drum and cards that provide you with maneuvers (could be Unflinching Persistence).

5 Freak drive + 1 majesty. These are always good cards, but what are you going to do after you untap. You could use them to stay untapped if you add bounce but I think maybe that is not too efficient. I like using them to bleed then call a vote or the other way - vote then bleed. To do this you need a better balance of vote and bleed cards. Also, adding some voter caps could help with recovering blood spent for virtuosa.

By the way, when you said your prey will stop blocking you, that is ideal isn't it? wouldn't it be good if your turn went like this:

You "Yseult bleeds for three"

Prey "no block, I'll take three"

You "freak drive"

You "Yseult calls Lily Prelude...."

Prey "I block with 1 intercept, wait no I don't..."

Predator "don't expect me to block it."

Prey "OK I block"

You "Virtuosa, Yseult is unblockable"

Vote passes....

You "Voter cap for two blood and two pool!"

That sounds so good to me I think I will have to make a daughters deck (but using Toreadors along side!)

Virtuosa at superior needs to be played when the action is announced. But he has no card cycling tech there, which makes it very likely he will jam to action modifiers/combat when people stop blocking.