Submission: Advanced Ur-Shulgi

His text box cutd off after tremere symbol.

In Canon, hes stupid fast, and abolishes the blood curse.

So, base does blood curse thing, why not make advanced just do fast stuff.

Prevent one damage a combat, an additional once each combat, and once a turn ifhe successfully preforms a D action agaimst your prey, untap him.

That puts him on par with Eze at least, and his lack of fortitude is made up for if he can prevent one damage AND still sideslip and has a build in untap.

So, he has SUP sideslip, flurry(and then some) and pursuit build in, but still isnt broken.

Why not make him like:

Ur-Shulgi, The Shepherd ADV

Independent. Ur-Shulgi have two votes [titled]. Ur-Shulgi gets an optional maneuver and/or additional strike during the first round of combat. [Merged] Ur-Shulgi strike with First Strike.

Eze cannot bounce, do additional strikes, prevent and in-clan dodge and maneuver and stealth options are very limited.

Meanwhile, Ur can bleed better, bounce, stealth, maneuver, dodge well and additional strike all better than Eze. Hell, he can eve Strike:CE. There is no way his special should be better than Eze's.

ReverendRevolver wrote:

His text box cutd off after tremere symbol

Unfortunately there is not much I can about that. The card creation program doesn't allow you to adjust/manipulate the size of disciplines symbols, clan symbols or the "D" action symbol. So they tend to be oversized compared to small text and distort the flow of text box.

Another comment...

"Eze cannot bounce, do additional strikes, prevent and in-clan dodge and maneuver and stealth options are very limited.

Meanwhile, Ur can bleed better, bounce, stealth, maneuver, dodge well and additional strike all better than Eze. Hell, he can eve Strike:CE. There is no way his special should be better than Eze's."

All I've done I offer some suggestions to Ur-Shurlgi's special abilities his discipline spread is the same as it ever was. I can't change his access to Dominate bleed, stealth, bounce, or maneuver compared to Eze.

As compared to being better than Eze, the demon prince, Idk what to say to that. There isn't much canon at all on that vampire. While Ur-Shulgi is often described as one of the baddest and oldest vampires to ever exist.

Just playing around with ideas:

Ur-Shulgi


Group 2

Independent: Ur-Shulgi has 3 votes (titled). He gets an additional strike each round of combat. +1 bleed.
Ur-Shulgi may discard a card requiring Celerity to end combat and untap as a strike.

Hmm...the unmerged version still doesn't seem strong enough.

BenPeal wrote:

Just playing around with ideas:

Ur-Shulgi


Group 2

Independent: Ur-Shulgi has 3 votes (titled). He gets an additional strike each round of combat. +1 bleed.
Ur-Shulgi may discard a card requiring Celerity to end combat and untap as a strike.

Hmm...the unmerged version still doesn't seem strong enough.

Add +1 stealth?